Review Detail of EXPxToutian in Whispers Across Worlds: An Uncharted Destiny (DROPPED)
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Just a head up. Leave the brain out of your skull. Things can get headache but readable for any that want to read. I, myself already read till C18. had to stop for now as i forgot to leave my brain out. Story are great but just a little different approach and i can’t give spoiler out of this story because i got so much complaints about it. So any of you want to be a judge of this story can come and read it. And ONE last things What is Adaptation?? -no need to coment me as i wont reply-
Whispers Across Worlds: An Uncharted Destiny (DROPPED)
MeepsNewGroove
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1) story don’t have any introductions like just straight white space and wish done.(don’t know if you just leave hole on that and come back with Flash-no-Jutsu) 2) MC already know what world he in but still feel wierd? Restless? Or maybe afraid of somethings? Of what?(act normal it’s not like the next day he’s dying) 3) fast paced story there are interaction but less monologue even if he saw or talk with notable characters(just follow normal route story but do make changes lest people see copy paste😂) 4)and why does he learn alone and what use book that he buy but read only book at library like the book he buy are empty? Not worth? First years book are introductions(why library? When he can just go to Room Of Requirement🤷🏻♂️) 5)I don’t know, but why different class when they are at same House and year?(or did you or me miss any info here🤔) I only got that. (1st Wish) - World travelers, with perks that look like system but only have Status like name,age and World travelers button(only after he complete the world like helping the world or anything i don’t know your story) (2nd Wish) - Adaptation? I don’t know but aren’t adaptation are like adjust on new environment or more like Evolving/Evolution on body. Please don’t hit me with questions 🙇🏻♂️🙇🏻♂️ Anymore i just want to read the story.
MeepsNewGroove:If you have any complaints please tell me of them so I can further improve. This story is more or so a “test” for future books I plan on making since I wanna see what the readers would enjoy reading so any complaints or suggestions is something im completely open to. Thank you for reading
Thank you for the feedback ! I’m sadly still recovering from my eye surgery so I can’t make any changes yet, but thank you! I’ll be making another story as this one was a test to see what you the readers would like and if I was up for the task. Once again thank you 🙇♂️
EXPxToutian:1) story don’t have any introductions like just straight white space and wish done.(don’t know if you just leave hole on that and come back with Flash-no-Jutsu) 2) MC already know what world he in but still feel wierd? Restless? Or maybe afraid of somethings? Of what?(act normal it’s not like the next day he’s dying) 3) fast paced story there are interaction but less monologue even if he saw or talk with notable characters(just follow normal route story but do make changes lest people see copy paste😂) 4)and why does he learn alone and what use book that he buy but read only book at library like the book he buy are empty? Not worth? First years book are introductions(why library? When he can just go to Room Of Requirement🤷🏻♂️) 5)I don’t know, but why different class when they are at same House and year?(or did you or me miss any info here🤔) I only got that. (1st Wish) - World travelers, with perks that look like system but only have Status like name,age and World travelers button(only after he complete the world like helping the world or anything i don’t know your story) (2nd Wish) - Adaptation? I don’t know but aren’t adaptation are like adjust on new environment or more like Evolving/Evolution on body. Please don’t hit me with questions 🙇🏻♂️🙇🏻♂️ Anymore i just want to read the story.