Review Detail of HambinoRanx in Comeet Legacy
Review detail
So let’s go ahead and get an early review underway that’s spoiler free. For writing quality it’s a 4/5 here And having a 4/5 isn’t bad it means what you’re writing is easy to understand and the message gets across nice and easy just a bit often you might miss a , or you use the wrong verb for a situation. All in all the first 6 chapters are good Update is a free pass as we only have 6 chapters at the moment. The story development throughout the first 6 chapters is fast and some unique deaths early so I have to give it a 5/5 here but we need a lot more in the coming chapters but it’s a great start. The character designs are simple and straight forward but they are 3 dimensional with uniqueness to them with flaws so that’s always good to see. Finally the world background is a 4/5 right now as we need to see more of this destroyed earth and the lasting effects these creatures have had on it. Again a 4/5 is good it shows your world building is on the right track. I look forward to doing a second review once you hit 50 chapters. Good luck and god speed Author.
Comeet Legacy
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I’d say the thought process of him being the only one that can stop will make the novel very one dimensional. The mc will basically have no appropriate rivals or partners/friends to go to the end of the story with him and my personal opinion Is that things like that limit the story somewhat but it is also based on what you’re looking to do
hello there, I understand your point there, but trust me😌 this novel is not one dimensional at all...there are dynamic characters which without them, he will not succeed
OzzWorld:I’d say the thought process of him being the only one that can stop will make the novel very one dimensional. The mc will basically have no appropriate rivals or partners/friends to go to the end of the story with him and my personal opinion Is that things like that limit the story somewhat but it is also based on what you’re looking to do
MAXandMILLS:I appreciate your thoughts, very helpful and motivating. Will do my possible best to complete the scores
hey, thanks for pointing out the grammar mistakes. I try my best to make it blunder free, but speed writing is a factor and I can't afford a Grammar Editor, but I will try my best. Thank you💚
Lucinda_Hacker:And maybe go back through and fix your grammar and spelling mistakes? Yes? Plz say yes