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oppaidaisuke_69
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why did you use the surname "Yamato" again? that is the surname of the Imperial Family of Japan(Royal family of Japan) you should've used Morgenröte as the MC's surname since his company's name is "Morgenröte" anyway

Gundam System in Multiverse

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I_love_drugs
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I made some revisions and improvements, and oh hey, I fixed some contradictions. **Universal Century Charter** Charter of the Universal Century **Proclamation** The United Terran Federation hereby proclaims the text below as the Charter of the Universal Century. Executed at the [Building/Location] on the first day of U.C. 0001 by the Prime Minister of the United Terran Federation, [Firstname] [Lastname]. --- **Chapter I. Universal Century** **Article 1** The United Terran Federation, and its Member States, to pursue the expansion of space activities and to protect all territories' environments, shall adopt the unified era named "the Universal Century" as a symbol of the unity of the citizenry. **Article 2** 1. The Universal Century shall be the sole official era name of the United Terran Federation. 2. The United Terran Federation shall prepare annual federal budgets and programs based on the Universal Century operating systems. 3. The principal and subsidiary organs of the United Terran Federation shall be "the Universal Century" in all official documents. --- **Chapter II. Expansion of space activities** **Article 3** The United Terran Federation and its Member States, in order to expand space activities for the survival of its citizens and the protection of all territories' environments, must play a constructive role in accordance with the fundamental principles of the United Terran Federation. --- **Chapter III. Development of space settlements** **Article 4** In the development of space settlements, including settlements on the Moon and other celestial bodies, the United Terran Federation and its Member States shall be guided by the principle of equal emphasis upon both development and the protection of all territories' environments, with due consideration of cultural and social diversity. **Article 5** Space settlement projects shall be integrated at a high level into the policies of the United Terran Federation and ensured in accordance with the principles of social stability. --- **Chapter IV. Space emigration policies** **Article 6** The United Terran Federation and its Member States shall execute active space emigration policies to ensure a decent existence for all those who lack sufficient resources. **Article 7** Every citizen of the United Terran Federation and its Member States has the right to freely move to and reside in the federally approved territories of any form, within the limitations of federal laws. **Article 8** The United Terran Federation shall manage all space settlements, including the settlements on the Moon and other celestial bodies, in the interests of the whole United Terran Federation's environment and the future of its citizens. **Article 9** Each space settlement shall function as a local public agency of the United Terran Federation, and its administrative function shall in principle belong to the central government of the United Terran Federation. **Article 10** The United Terran Federation shall legislate specifically for the space emigration of displaced persons and civilians of third countries who need the support of the Federation. --- **Chapter V. Rights and infrastructure of the space settlements** **Article 11** The United Terran Federation, under federal laws, shall pursue the realization of people's rights and fundamental freedoms without distinction as to race, sex, language, or religion, for all citizens of the space settlements, including settlements on the Moon and other celestial bodies. **Article 12** The United Terran Federation, in order to create and maintain an amenable environment for the citizenry of any races, shall establish public infrastructure for economics, society, culture, education, and healthcare in the space settlements, including settlements on the Moon and other celestial bodies. --- **Chapter VI. General provisions** **Article 13** This Charter shall not be misinterpreted as giving any right to engage in any activity or to perform any act aimed at the destruction of the rights recognized in this Charter. **Article 14** This Charter, authentically written in the English text, shall remain deposited in the archives of the United Terran Federation of such representatives as the United Terran Federation may designate. --- **Chapter VII. Future** **Article 15** The United Terran Federation shall prepare the following articles for the future of its citizens with high hopes and expectations: 1. In preparation for an extraterrestrial biological emergency, the United Terran Federation shall increase and expand research and preparedness. 2. In recognition of existing human subspecies, including all already existing ethnicities, mutants, metahumans, and extrahumans, as well as sentient races native to Earth besides humans, the United Terran Federation shall ensure their rights and representation in the administration of government, alongside any potential new space-adapted human races. 3. The United Terran Federation shall establish diplomatic relations and frameworks for the acceptance and integration of extraterrestrial races into the broader citizen community, fostering cooperation and mutual understanding among all sentient beings. 4. The term "Terran" shall not denote a single race but shall serve as a unifying term for all inhabitants of Earth, including those residing in her extensions, which are any celestial bodies, territories, or places under the jurisdiction of the United Terran Federation. This term emphasizes the shared identity and common destiny of all citizens of the Federation. **The Union of the Terrans**

Wingzer0
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Just named the character after my favorite protagonist from the franchise

oppaidaisuke_69
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The name sucks! no offense by the way

Wingzer0:Just named the character after my favorite protagonist from the franchise
oppaidaisuke_69
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THIS one is better

Wingzer0:Just named the character after my favorite protagonist from the franchise
Passing_Through
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This type of name SUCKS.

oppaidaisuke_69:THIS one is better
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oppaidaisuke_69
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I can accept anything but Yamato

Passing_Through:This type of name SUCKS.
Wingzer0
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none taken, everyone has an opinion if the name is the only complaint I think I'm writing a pretty good story then

oppaidaisuke_69:The name sucks! no offense by the way
oppaidaisuke_69
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Yeah it's only the name but here's a suggestion: why not form a Copy of Earth Federation but with no corruption and all the original charter was NOT altered by the corrupts who assassinated the first Prime Minister of the Earth Federation I remember even posting the original and unaltered charter/constitution of the Earth Federation so you can have a reference if you hadn't noticed yet:

Wingzer0:none taken, everyone has an opinion if the name is the only complaint I think I'm writing a pretty good story then
I_love_drugs
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I agree with the commentator that I wouldn't type his/her name because of it it vulgar Morgenrote means "Dawn" your MC is the bringer of a new dawn in that world so don't you want to emphasize that??

Wingzer0:Just named the character after my favorite protagonist from the franchise
oppaidaisuke_69
oppaidaisuke_69Lv4oppaidaisuke_69

Wow it all started from disagreement about the name of MC now we're drafting a constitution