Review Detail of HeavenWillDaoist in Pursuit Of The Origin
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ZaylentLv4Zaylent
yea, if you put it up like that it feels like authors racking/filling up word counts and have lil bit of AI help along the way but nothing i cant read. ill give it a try, prolly desperate at this point but not desperate enough to dive through FF of a shthole if aint necessary
The_Dark_Hydrax:It feels written by an AI like too many descriptive words for simple things like instead of saying "I woke up with light hitting my eyes" it says "I awakened to the glistening beautiful sunlight that cascaded beautifully through the opening upon my window curtain" not exactly like that I'm paraphrasing but you get how sentence filler that sounds like right?
Itech_DivyanshuLv3Itech_Divyanshu
HeavenWillDaoistLv15HeavenWillDaoist
Itech_Divyanshu:bro atleast read my comment. I just said I like space-time magic based content 🙃
The_Dark_HydraxLv4The_Dark_Hydrax
Itech_Divyanshu:bro atleast read my comment. I just said I like space-time magic based content 🙃
HeavenWillDaoistLv15HeavenWillDaoist
It’s okish, but the author making up some lame excuses for some stuff and something’s don’t outright make sense
Zaylent:so man, did u read the fic? if so, is it okish?
Nimil_pardeshiLv4Nimil_pardeshi
The_Dark_HydraxLv4The_Dark_Hydrax
It feels written by an AI like too many descriptive words for simple things like instead of saying "I woke up with light hitting my eyes" it says "I awakened to the glistening beautiful sunlight that cascaded beautifully through the opening upon my window curtain" not exactly like that I'm paraphrasing but you get how sentence filler that sounds like right?
Zaylent:so man, did u read the fic? if so, is it okish?