this has been a fun read, now the only reason it's not 5 stars is that is that I feel like the pace is too fast. He went from basically a cub to a king of a territory in 40+ chapters, not to mention he is a rank under saint which gods fear apparently đ¤. I'm not say it's bad, just want maybe a side chapter that explains your power ranking in mind, how many times can a skill level up to more advance stages stuff like that in the side chapter. Is he going to build a kingdom in the forest? Can beast get humanoid forms or just beast forms? Is he going to get a boo or a harem? Please include these in a side chapter, otherwise keep up the good work
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LIKEI hope you don't mind me throwing out ideas as idk what you had planned. once again I want to tell you, you did a great job with this. Are there dungeons in this world if not maybe you could include some, I was thinking it would be cool if he went into a super hard dungeon or some other way that'll enhance his bloodline kinda like the kirin tiger idea that was sweet đ. Maybe something like the Fenrir bloodline or some other mythical creature that would compliment or addon to his wind and thunder. I would like to see more world building, does he explore outside the forgotten forest?
It's totally fine! I appreciate your comment, definitely going to consider all of the ideas, and of course you will see more world building.
Kitsune_Kurama:I hope you don't mind me throwing out ideas as idk what you had planned. once again I want to tell you, you did a great job with this. Are there dungeons in this world if not maybe you could include some, I was thinking it would be cool if he went into a super hard dungeon or some other way that'll enhance his bloodline kinda like the kirin tiger idea that was sweet đ. Maybe something like the Fenrir bloodline or some other mythical creature that would compliment or addon to his wind and thunder. I would like to see more world building, does he explore outside the forgotten forest?