Review Detail of Ella_Estrella23 in Carnivals: Claimed By The Deranged Alpha Prince [BL]

Firstly, Ya'll should please come check the book out! The story has an intriguing plot, though a little cliche, the description is detailed except for a couple of typos and the characters are okay. Everything else is perfect, the worldbuilding and updating frequency are both more than okay. However, the MC is kind of annoyingly dumb, and even though I sympathize with him with the loss of his family, that should have changed him a bit. For example, not totally trusting people even your friends, and thinking things over before acting. I understand that he wants to he wants to find out who his family's murders are and the only way is to get closer to that dickhead, but he should have used his head—even a little. Honestly, I love this story but the MC keeps disappointing me and it's a little sad that aside from his powers that were sealed, he has nothing else to rely on and always has to be dependent. He doesn't even have the slightest sense of suspicion and I think this should all be corrected. The only character making the story still lovable is the ML and I hope to see further development in the MC and a perfect revenge against those who killed his family! Aside from all these, the story is great and I would recommend it to everyone! Again, please come check the book out!