Review Detail of David19687 in Potter's luck

ron is acting like a racist from the 1800 towards anyone not gryffindor. Translation is terrible mistake genders names and grammer. kinda just your cookie cutter "oh no dumbeldore is bad and mc is great in everything". not even something new or intresting that makes you wanna read it even if most of its bad. save your time this one is not worth the read.