Review Detail of cornyboggartmort in Just Another Chat Group

The story came rough at first, the MC was in the way of self destruction as there's this bu***hit element called crush and teen angst in Severus' life when he took over, and you know what always happens at puberty, shit happens in that part of life for its 80%, and while it seems off putting and cringe, the monologues where it describes his descent to madness because of Lily, it add a natural and exquisite uniqueness in the story telling WHEN the chat group was introduced in the story, it's where he started the elevation of his character development. The gradual rise of the characters mentality from garbled mess to slightly okay but still mess mentality were done perfectly in my opinion, it might sound as an awful thing but you can't quickly go to 100% normal and truly happy guy if you're stuck from being depressed by 16 years, that's the reason why the MC was still yet effected by Severus' emotions and is not a complete 'fake it till you make it' MC, those kinds of MC's makes me cringe. If anything were to be said, it should be 'good job' and not 'this sucks' to this story.