Review Detail of Daoisth7cZGj in Ayanokouji in Shadow Slave

bro just rewrote the original novel. And what the author adds on his own makes other characters inferior and stereotyped, that is, he not only rewrote the plot, but also managed to make the characters no interesting and cardboard. Kiyotaka as a character does not bring anything new to the plot, and his mystery and other aspects that readers love him for are completely gone. Although, maybe the problem is in Kiyotaka himself and his maximum is to manipulate schoolchildren.