The plot is intriguing - Reincarnating to fix a novel's mistakes. Unless I'm mistaken, this is the first time I heard about such a plot. Sadly, what lets the story down is the writing quality. There are many grammar mistakes. If it was only punctuation mistakes, it would have not mattered. The problem is the mixture of present tense and past tense in the writing. I suggest using Grammarly to fix those mistakes and I'm sure your novel will be great!
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