Review Detail of Haizao in Nateaser: Reborn As My Love Interest

Reading through the first dozen chapters, I can say for certain that this is an enjoyable, detailed work with passion and a good sense of narrative balance. The characters are well crafted, though I feel that the MC could explore their gender swap a bit more. There's a passage where they say they aren't transgender, and there's a bit of a clunky sidestepping of the issue that occurs via amnesia. That said, gender is a tricky construct, but perhaps there was something to explore there that won't be. The first-person POV with the main character keeps one grounded in their experience, while the third-person POV for side characters allows the writer to provide more information about the world. In terms of technical proficiency, most errors are related to punctuation and clunkiness in conveying a lot of information at once. Breaking up the paragraphs would also be more in line with Webnovel's style, since as of this date a lot of the writing seems more consistent with long-form traditional novels. Having said all this, I definitely recommend this novel if one has the patience for a more traditional style and an appetite for rich detail and character-driven action.