Review Detail of Beziik in MY SUGAR MUMMY IS A BEAUTIFUL VAMPIRE

Not my cup of tea. You have good grammar and logical structuring but this novel feels ... idk like a glass of water. It's ok when you're thirsty but it's bland and flavourless, the only hook is the romance but that gets old quickly after blake's acceptance. The world you have here does not make me wanna know more, to be more precise, you have not shown anything that's worth knowing more about. The vampires feel just like your run of the mill rich schmucks, they would fit perfectly in every Chinese novel out there and overall the story does not look like it has any overarching plot. I cannot waste any more fastpasses and coins to see if it gets better later on.