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It started off fine but then it started to get really bad. The whole world traveling thing was ridiculous and unnecessary. I still don't understand why he reincarnated Mc as a child.I think the character is very op and has a lot of time. It would have been better if he was initially reincarnated into a high school kid, saved by Mei, and became Master - Apprentice . And you make the world even more absurd with a child next to you. I mean, it would be nice if he fixed the flaws, but I don't think he'll do that.
Being adopted by Mei Mei in JJK
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Thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it. When I saw JJK, I was so excited and I thought, what if other countries had OP characters like Sukuna and Gojo? Why limit it to just Japan? There are so many countries with different histories and religions, each with their own unique curse spirits. It would be really interesting to explore that. I didn't want the main character to be OP right away, I wanted him to gradually build up his powers and explore the world before diving into the main storyline.
Your aim is good, but I think your experience is lacking. I think your starting point was very wrong, he took the reincarnation thing too seriously. I hope You solve this problem in your other books.And your pace was very fast, your sections about other countries were very few. I couldn't see anything new. If he will go there again in the future, why did he tour again?And I'm very curious? In the beginning, MC was a fly and got on planes, but later he took a child with him and how did he travel?
Moody_Passerby:Thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it. When I saw JJK, I was so excited and I thought, what if other countries had OP characters like Sukuna and Gojo? Why limit it to just Japan? There are so many countries with different histories and religions, each with their own unique curse spirits. It would be really interesting to explore that. I didn't want the main character to be OP right away, I wanted him to gradually build up his powers and explore the world before diving into the main storyline.