the story is good but it has a major flaw and its the mc, author favor his own mc so much that its illogical....he put a sword to freyas "danmachi" neck and otahr did not kill him ? illogical to max anyone even thinking about harming freya and he vould go berserker in the middle of street and paint it red lol yet mc can stand there at lvl 3 acting like he is the coolst smurf in the world , lets not forget freya herself vould have killd him by the end of the day lol with so many dirty things she got on every god/godess she could easly do it, there is a reason why she is at the top lol and mc even told her he knew about her other personality lol and he still lives.. illogical again .. this is a story for those of you who like the mc to be the best,coolest and in every turn be in the center of attention and whenever he does something it will always turn out good nothing ever going against him and that peeps are this stories biggest flaw its so obviouse whats going to happend and its first class wish fulfillment
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LIKEsure bud, but english aint even my second language most of those that cries about Grammar is usual from an english talking Country where they have no need to even learn a new language or have the brain capacity for it
Amataratsul:Grammar is a need, this is harder to read then stories you have described
Yea but you are typing in English, when I speak Spanish (as bad as I am) I still try to use correct grammar.
Na1gel:sure bud, but english aint even my second language most of those that cries about Grammar is usual from an english talking Country where they have no need to even learn a new language or have the brain capacity for it