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Review Detail of Arodicus in Machinination King in Cultivation World

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Arodicus
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Generally I don’t like doing reviews before 40 chapters and at this time there are only 7. So far the story is very well written. I don’t see any issues with grammar and the premise is very interesting. Only thing I would point out is the story is already set out to be very fast paced. With glossing over a lot of what happens with short descriptions. He spent 5 days doing this then we get detailed info on something then he travelled and 3 things happened to him but it is summarized in a couple sentences. If you are planning for fast paced 2-300 chapter book this type of stuff is ok but if you plan on 500-1000 ch these details help slow the pace and give a better picture of the world. Overall I have enjoyed the content and hope author keeps it up. I think they have talent in writing

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Machinination King in Cultivation World

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