over all story is okay, mc seems like the biggest loser of all time, and narrow minded, can't seem to think outside the box, even with all the intelligence he seems to be people pleaser like a dog, if someone in real life is like this it is truly a pity, a suffering of self.
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LIKESorry, don't want to seem negative, just reminded of my friend who no longer is with me, I'm still have crippling sadness and anger for him, good luck, hope you make it.
WorldScholar:If you think so. MC will definitely change his behaviour as he gets to know more about the world.