Review Detail of Santy_Melay in Entertainment started in Youth Pi (Hiatus)
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I like it but the novel would have been better without all this theme of the other world, plus the system seems to be for decoration, it is of no use. And Miaomao's reaction seems surreal to me, so you wouldn't react when you found out that your boyfriend is not from this world.
Entertainment started in Youth Pi (Hiatus)
NeeekoShin
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Thank you so much for your suggestions and feedback. This is my first time writing, and I also see too many plot holes in my novel. I try to write it daily, but now that I'm busy, I just write what comes to mind, and some don't make sense. I guess I bite more than I chew. But I'll do better next time. I hope that time you can review it again.
