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Item: Fire descendant: I fell in love with our attacker
Rating: 3.6

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The book has a beautiful build up. I find it is evenly paced. You could take time to proof read your work before posting you will be able to correct errors of grammar, tense. Apart from which it's an all round go effort, which can become great if you take care to proof read before posting.

Fire descendant: I fell in love with our attacker

Jesutofunmi_Lucas

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Jesutofunmi_LucasAuthorJesutofunmi_Lucas

Thanks, I will do so before posting other chapters, I am trying to improve my english.

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Ojedokunruth_1Lv1Ojedokunruth_1

She has corrected many of them, try it again. It's just that she needs to learn a little on sentence structure

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