At least so far (chapter 15) it’s been an ok story, but like with what I find with many other fanfics on this site, the MC is too focused on thinking with his lower half at times, like for what reason are you telling me about him( a now highschool boy) jerking off to Midnight? And why is he right up against Nejire when spotting her doing squats, that isn’t how you spot someone. Also what was his age in his previous life? It gets confusing when he immediately asks Midnight (an adult) to go out with him when he sees her, but then is fawning over this middle school girl (now in highschool) It seems like the author just wanted a reason to justify his MC being an annoying horny character so he gave him a cultivation technique that increase his Libido, why he thought this was good for his story I’m not sure. I’m sure some people are fine with these things and even prefer it, but to me it just completley takes away from the story
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