Review Detail of Raptor2244 in In MHA With a Dimensional Trading Quirk

Sorry, i can't take this seriously as critisim when you're getting it wrong. what's the name of his devil fruit? he doesn't have one but you mentioned him having it. seeing that you asked a question about his energies, and you were the only one to do so, in the last few chapters made me wonder if you ever read it or just skimmed to the ebd. And if you find three types of energies super complicated, well, I understand, not everyone's brain operate on the same level.

I definitely did skim, so I can’t say anything about the devil fruit. I saw that he got a devil fruit so I assumed he ate it. But the three different types of energies thing is setting yourself up for confusion and failure. I’m definitely not the only one thinking this even if I said it. If you go find the author outsidr on this app and read some of his novels you will see what I’m talking about. It’s not that it’s confusing to the mind, things can be kept track of pretty easily. Its just convoluted and unnecessary. Adding extra energies doesn’t really add any substance to your story, since as a fanfiction writer you can determine your own power system if you want. You could easily say “the spiritual side of chakra can be used as magic” or “the physical side of chakra can be used as ki” and no one can question you since it’s your universe and you make the rules. But mashing three powersytems into one doesn’t make your character seem more powerful or accomplished, just overly complicated and a waste of time. I wont lie, I did skim your novel so I cant comment on the plot or on the behavior of the characters. But I did see that he uses multiple energies which as I’ve said 3 times just doesnt make any sense. But this is your universe and your novel. If you don’t want to take what I said seriously, don’t. That’s okay I’m not gonna cry about it.

please, can you tell me when did he get a devil fruit?

I guess I’m wrong about that. I must have misread. After skimming through the first 20 chapters again I didn’t find anything. I thought I read about it in earlier chapters. That doesn’t change the bulk of my review though. Which is still valid even if you don’t agree with it. If you don’t like it, just delete it, I wont right another since you wont take it seriously because I just skimmed.

Lol. It's not that I like it or not. It's amusing. You're reviewing something you didn't read and think it's valid, and you think it's normal. Also, don't reply to me. Not interested in conversation with you.