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the concept is intriguing but the character is written in a very dissatisfying way and is just essentially a prop for the story no actual training with his powers is very stupid and somehow gets over losing his only family like in one chapter it's a good origin for an antihero but this guy just becomes a plot device do not recommend
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its a story with many charecters, not just everything surrounding the mc, to be fair however, I could have done a better job. Its a plot and the charecters move it forward, The Mc is a charecter, he is the main one, yet not the only one. Like I said maybe I could have done a better job not quite sure how however, I wasnt really provided with to many directions specifically pointing to things out for me to go and improve them.
look his powers are great however giving so many perspectives confuses the people and takes away from the main character also shield essentially killed his family him helping them is just depressing he could have become an antihero and opened up different paths for scenarios with other marvel characters also no random dude gets powers and just leaves it people want to see him build his powers and use them in creative ways to get ahead not be a lackey