Review Detail of Fito in Aegon Snow
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well it has its interesting parts, but everything happens very fast and there doesn't seem to be any character development, the mc is like that and that's it, they don't show how he prepared himself or what he did, they say he spent some time preparing himself as a teacher but it is mentioned in passing and in another moment he appears with a network of spies and it is also mentioned in passing.
Aegon Snow
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This is a point that many people criticize me for and to be honest with myself I also blame myself for this point but I wrote this story a long time ago and I was completely discouraged from starting it again. Maybe I will do a spin off of this story or a rewrite but for now I prefer to move forward with what I have, I didn't think it would be so appreciated so thank you for participating and reading I hope you like the sequel even more.