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_DEKIM_
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It has meh points but even with these meh points it deserves at least 4.7.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Hellfox in Hazbin

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samadomkv
samadomkvAuthorsamadomkv

as for the Ninja stuff, we'll it's really important to Husk background, it's meant to feel out of place as he's really old.

_DEKIM_:Ah, the protagonist doesn't kill. The protagonist is a ninja and a ninja is a little out of place in the world of the Hazbin hotel. The protagonist is very cool. The protagonist's powers are not as demonic as Alastor's. just my opinion.
samadomkv
samadomkvAuthorsamadomkv

Thanks for the review, could I ask if there's anything you think that could need improving. or make it better??

_DEKIM_
_DEKIM_Lv1_DEKIM_

Ah, the protagonist doesn't kill. The protagonist is a ninja and a ninja is a little out of place in the world of the Hazbin hotel. The protagonist is very cool. The protagonist's powers are not as demonic as Alastor's. just my opinion.

samadomkv
samadomkvAuthorsamadomkv

Haha, well about the no killing rule, there is a reason, but I'll dive more into it when we get to the hotel or a bit before and trust me when I say Tucker is ten times more scary Alastor when he goes into his true demon form. I've given some hints e.g: When he opens his eyes and when confronted the Demonic bird in chapter one.

_DEKIM_:Ah, the protagonist doesn't kill. The protagonist is a ninja and a ninja is a little out of place in the world of the Hazbin hotel. The protagonist is very cool. The protagonist's powers are not as demonic as Alastor's. just my opinion.
_DEKIM_
_DEKIM_Lv1_DEKIM_

Ok