Pretty good story overall, decent decision making throughout, no super giant glaring potholes to break immersion. That said I only got to chapter 89 because I started getting bored since a lot of chapter starting around 80 were about other characters. It’s just not to my preference. I care about the MC and only the MC, I don’t want to read about 3 other fights going on while he’s getting control of a fear-stricken mob. I just don’t care about them. So this story isn’t for me if it’s going to be more of the same later. Just doesn’t keep my attention. Very good otherwise though, so if you don’t mind the constant POV changes or even like them, then this is actually a very good story.
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