Review Detail of GodOfLightning in TVD: The Seventh Original

First of all, one such chapter, also I didn't say it wouldn't effect the story. What I said was that it might feel like a filler because it wouldn't effect the story in the short-run. If there is one thing I truly hate is when someone twists my words... Also, all things have their reasons, how else do you want to build a background to a character? Should I just say he turned, killed some people than a few hundred years later he met someone, but he was totally different? Dude, those events, with characters that might not appear again, shape the character, build the character's development and personality and also widen the world's background. As for the timeline. Starts in 999, than 1001, than 1070 with a flashbacks to 1005 and 1020

Those flashbacks lasted for ever like three chapters and it wasn’t just three chapters almost the entire book is fillers he has that interaction with a pack immediately after finding the mikaelsons body’s and forgets about the pack. You are the one twisting words here I have not twisted any of your words. And you did say it wouldn’t have any effect on the story maybe you need to reread what you wrote, he hears the witch admit to killing him but doesn’t do anything so that Interaction was worthless just for some herbs that you can find all over as they weren’t destroyed by anyone yet as they haven’t realized that weakness yet. You have this whole thing going on in Japan when you said his goal was China but he didn’t even bother trying to reach China after going to Japan which is very easy. You haven’t had him try to turn anyone yet or see what his bite may do to someone when he was experimenting with how he is diffrent which is something he should of done but you conveniently forgot he was just talking about finding out how he is diffrent and then leaves someone without watching what happens and now he has a beta. You seem to have some sort of fascination with Japan when it does not effect the TVD universe and are just going on and on about his life there and a constant change in time sucks even for just one chapter it gets hard to keep up with not knowing which time he is in if something has or hasn’t already happened. We just got to one time for you to go back for an entire chapter. And honestly these are only some of the complaints I thought the story was mostly good it’s why I did not go on and on before and gave you the one that made me drop the story and probably many others. If you are having a fanfic something that is needed is some sort of ne’er constant connection to the original plot as that is what people want to see interaction between the original character and the diffrence he makes to the original plot not a whole side story

You said it won’t change a lot in the near future except japans outlook on the the supernatural and the flashback to 1020 is 4 chapters long from chapter 7 and finally chapter 12 is back to 1070

When I said that I didn't speak of the whole flashback and I never said I did. All I said is that the specific chapter, which fills the gap of time and explains Sato's origin does so. Also, what makes you think that in this fanfic Japan won't effect TVD?

Because you said so and it is impossible to unless you force some more plot re read what you said I keep telling you to do so I’ve already repeated what you said and yes the flashback as a whole you meant as you said so when you said it won’t have any effect except how Japan sees the supernatural so anything to do with the flashback has no effect

This chapter is totally about who is Sato and how he found Isaac, won't change a lot in terms of the near future of the story, other than the view of Japan on the supernatural.(I Know it might feel like a filler by it showing the point of view of another character, but I decided I want to make it like this anyway...Don't worry, it is important for the story.) This is a quote of what I said, word for word. You need a narration? This chapter SPECIFICALLY,(NOT the one before and the two after) Is all about Sato finding Isaac. This chapter SPECIFICALLY, will not effect much on the NEAR future other than Japan's view on the supernatural. I Know it might feel like a filler by it showing the point of view of another character(Again it is only this chapter). Don't worry, it is important for the story. Meaning it will have other effects other than the one's you see right now. I'm not gonna bother explaining it again, and again, you are welcome to drop.