Review Detail of mow in [HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood
Review detail
The story is good, but it seems to be translated by an AI which means a lot of unnecessary yapping slowing down the story making the pace feel off, on top of that the update schedule is not very good.
[HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood
MaliciousPrince
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But it is translated by AI, the warning is at the end of each chapter. I never hid it. As for the slower story, that's what happens when you create a world where you need to explain things and develop the characters. If you don't like how I did things, that's your choice and I respect that. As for the chapter schedule, I have a life and work, I write when I can.
I have no issues with it, I'll remain reading the story i was simply leaving a review for how i felt. I do know most authors dont just sit on their pc all day so while the update schedule is lacking and it sucks tbh i understand. Only thing i think is unnecessary is the amount of time needed to go from one scene to another by that i mean its taking like 3 chapters named gringotts and he still hasnt even entered the building.
MaliciousPrince:But it is translated by AI, the warning is at the end of each chapter. I never hid it. As for the slower story, that's what happens when you create a world where you need to explain things and develop the characters. If you don't like how I did things, that's your choice and I respect that. As for the chapter schedule, I have a life and work, I write when I can.
Question: how is this yuri if the mc is a man? Is there yuri between his lovers? Other women in yuri? Or is it something else?
MaliciousPrince:But it is translated by AI, the warning is at the end of each chapter. I never hid it. As for the slower story, that's what happens when you create a world where you need to explain things and develop the characters. If you don't like how I did things, that's your choice and I respect that. As for the chapter schedule, I have a life and work, I write when I can.
MaliciousPrince:But it is translated by AI, the warning is at the end of each chapter. I never hid it. As for the slower story, that's what happens when you create a world where you need to explain things and develop the characters. If you don't like how I did things, that's your choice and I respect that. As for the chapter schedule, I have a life and work, I write when I can.
THIZZGATOR:"homeless people just should just buy a house" smooth brain mentality here.
ArtoriaPendragon_:Question: how is this yuri if the mc is a man? Is there yuri between his lovers? Other women in yuri? Or is it something else?