Review Detail of Frigid_Monarch in The Secrets of Sylaenalond

I finished reading the 2nd chapter and here's my rough review on the story. The main character Elvina looks like she's already full of life but she's not fully fleshed out yet which is fine, It's just the start of the story. For any readers that's reading this right now, I highly recommend this novel! I noticed a few plot holes in the story like in the part where she's still not an adventurer even though she participated in the "Thousand Year War". She is also revealing her race as a High Elf to a random demi human in the hotel, without even knowing her name. Those two points are the ones I noticed. There are a few issues in the spacing and paragraphs but other than that I think highly of this story and will follow along to see Elvina's journey.