Well, it was decent for an amateur. The writing style technically is pretty smooth so the atmosphere overall was maintained. Perhaps a little too wordy with descriptions, and the plot was little foggy but it was clear with time! The MC was saved from being an average good guy, couldn't have expected that twist with him. Would rate it a decent 6.5/10!
Horimiya_6779
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