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ZeilTheTurtle
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So you just copied russian fanfic with some changes.. Well you changed the prologue, his name and cut or shortened scenes that were in the russian fanfic.

MHA: Sovereign of shadows

LuckyDemi

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LuckyDemi
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If you think so, then write which chapters and where they come from. I'll rewrite them

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can you send me the name of the fanfic and why you think so?

ZeilTheTurtle
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In the your prologue his heart stops and he died in the hospital, but then in first chapter he says that he was calmly walking around city when someone offered a chance to him and he ended up in the darkness. I have just checked last chapter, which was conversation of heroes and it is copied straight from russian fanfic.

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