Review Detail of Haruchai in marvel:Self-Evolution Into superman
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The story is very good and action packed. The psuedo science stuff was also interesting and logical. Its actually better constructed than many of the other Marvel stuff out there. My main gripe is the terrible grammar and Chinezation of the entire thing. It has a lot of "Kid, you dare!" vibes common in wuxia novels and the way characters speak and interact definitely points out to a Chinese work. However, in the entire story I have not read any single acknowledgement from the author that this was a translation from a Chinese novel, so either this was ripped off from soneone else's hard work or this was an entirely original fanfiction by someone that was overly influenced by how a typical wuxia novel would read like. In either scenario I sincerely hope the author will do his/her best to westernize the entire thing. Specially since this was set in the USA. It just causes whiplash and culture shock everytime I see a Chinese element appear again and again. If you can ignore those out of context Chinese elements then its definitely a worthwhile read.
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Read the description carefully before reviewing. I have said from day one that it is a translation from Chinese with filtering out toxins. What I mean here are strong toxins such as Tony Shi Stark and the Chinese Statue of Liberty, supporting China to become the strongest in the world and changing Chinese names, for example, the black sky in the hand is called Huang Shi and obvious racism. Just like Nick Fury calls his braised eggs and black-eyed dumplings A black person is a bad gangster, and anyone who meets MC calls him a yellow monkey and many others. These are the poisons that I'm talking about it. As for the clear dialogue, I cannot change it because it would destroy the context of the novel, and I cannot fix it. I think it is very little. For most of the novel, Adam ends the dialogue easily, and anyone who says to him, "Oh, child," as you say, or insults him, either dies or becomes a laboratory rat in the same chapter or the next chapter. I wrote all of it. This is because I will not write it again. I will pin this comment so that everyone who has the same problem can see it. I guarantee that this book has been free of most of the toxins that will prevent you from reading, so just read and enjoy.