Review Detail of Dhaval_chandra in System's POV

This is just like a rough draft there's no world building like we don't even know whether the mc looks like a Chinese,Muslim,Indian or European Their main family recidence was described as "lots of greenery" and "bigger than their home" zero fun except when he face slaps young masters.You will only read this if u have read all the others and you don't have anything to do.This authors story is good but doesn't know how to express himself which makes the novel value plum down tremendously.The system used by normal people is copy of the novel with sunless.If u involve world building in your novel you will be one of the greatest.(like the novel with sunless in it i don't remebmber the name)