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Lachgar
LachgarLv32mthLachgar

An average apocalypse story with a mentally ill mc, I think. And I see in the signs that it will not be a harem and that it will be romantic. However, the author presents us with the point of view of his unfaithful wife, even though the author confirms that she is not FL. I don't see what's the point of showing that, other than padding.

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My Angelic Girlfriend in the Apocalypse

The_jocker

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The_jocker
The_jockerAuthorThe_jocker

Thank you for an honest review. It let me see my short comings as a new author but.... I think you have been a bit hasty in saying that, you will know why her pov was shown in the next few chs since this isn't a multiple lead novel.

Travis_1196
Travis_1196Lv2Travis_1196

I think bro, you should wait as the story is just on the beginning stage and we don't usually see non Harem story on this platform!

Old_Fool
Old_FoolLv15Old_Fool

Author can you tell me if the MC is decently strong enough to not be bullied??

The_jocker:Thank you for an honest review. It let me see my short comings as a new author but.... I think you have been a bit hasty in saying that, you will know why her pov was shown in the next few chs since this isn't a multiple lead novel.
The_jocker
The_jockerAuthorThe_jocker

Yes, he is strong enough.

Old_Fool:Author can you tell me if the MC is decently strong enough to not be bullied??