The story shines in character development and progression, with a clear, concise writing style that's free of grammatical errors. Although the system concept needs refinement, it grew on me, offering a unique twist to the protagonist's journey. The novel marries a unique system element with compelling character arcs and plot advancement. It showcases the author's ability to adapt and improve, promising an engaging read for fans of the genre. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story and its characters evolve.
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