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Review Detail of ZombieSirGatoREAD in In DC with James Lee’s perfect body and skills

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There is Softcore BL in this novel, and the chapters are weird. Like they feel like what happens after/ in between the action (hard to explain). For example the mc kills a villain “off screen” then beats up his friends “off screen” then pleads guilty and is sent to juvenile detention prison I think? Like I would prefer to read about the fight with the villian then the fight with his friends instead of him just skipping that and with him in prison, oh and there is prison g’rape (not mc so far as I’ve read) so be warned. There was also a sudden sidekick that just felt like a “…really?”

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In DC with James Lee’s perfect body and skills

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Tbh I didn’t even think it would get this popular, I made this when I was horrible at writing so the pacing is incredibly bad. All the same thanks for the review, it’ll really help me make better writing decisions. Also, does this mean you like it or not?