Review Detail of RoneGreninja in My accidental isekai life as a Plunderer
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hello readers this is my first time writing a fanfiction so writing might not be good. so if you notice something is wrong with the writing please inform me. i hope by reading your comments my writing will get better, thank you.
My accidental isekai life as a Plunderer
RoneGreninja
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nightreaper126Lv13nightreaper126
OK, author everything is perfect so far (since I only read the first chapter) except that a lot of readers would find one thing annoying and that is we wouldn't notice if the characters are talking or thinking or even if the 3rd pov is describing something so please put something like "..." for talking and '...' for thinking
Destroyer404Lv14Destroyer404
nightreaper126:OK, author everything is perfect so far (since I only read the first chapter) except that a lot of readers would find one thing annoying and that is we wouldn't notice if the characters are talking or thinking or even if the 3rd pov is describing something so please put something like "..." for talking and '...' for thinking