Review Detail of LifeDayDreams in Humans' Limits

Hi, I would like to give myself a full score but I want to always strive to do better so... I'm personally enthused by the idea of the book and I try developing it to the best of my ability while keeping everything logical and consistent. So, I hope you guys and gals will like it. Just try my book and if you have any idea or proposal to help me improve, be my guest. Fighting !!!!