Review Detail of Kari_Chan in APOKALYPSIS: Lost Magic Awakening

Heyo! So I love your book I actually quite enjoy it. I love the humor I would keep it up. It actually makes the story more fun. so far. The only thing that needs a little fixing up is I would say certain words you can condense to make the dialogues smoother and the actions of the characters even after dialogue. I did comment a lot because I wanted to be very helpful, so I hope that’s OK. I love the fact that you add your language in there it gives the story a culture, especially how you even described the food. Little details like that can go along way in a story I personally like it it gives your story its own flare. and so far, I really love your characters. in your story gives me like a magical type, anime vibe when your characters chant, their spells out loud and conjure things through their powers. (And sorry for the very long review, but I wanted to be honest. just like I would want anyone to do the same for my novel ❤️) keep up the great work!!