Review Detail of _r34der_ in Blunt Pencil

First here! Haha, but anyways, this novel may be a bit confusing at the beginning but isn't every novel? Bear with the author through this novel! Maybe it's a hidden gem... Let me say, that when I first saw it, the novel was a bit confusing. With the rapids and things like that, I found myself growing more and more confused. But I believe ink will clarify all the information in the future.