Review Detail of no_life in Naruto: Let’s Destroy the Plot!
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the shadow clone technique that you over complicated, the casual way he achieves Sage mode, the way he goes to leaf and the guards just take a random kid to the leader of their village the most important and probably busy guy but yeah this random kid let's take him there, also why would they question some kid entering the village it's a big place people probably come and go all the time, this didn't bug me till the other reviewer said but the parents thing is true too.I did like the bear Summons it felt like they were his special cheat and it was pretty cool 😎 having him be an uzimaki is also pretty nice with there chains sealing and minds eye
Joanjudo:Meh too bad I guess, could you tell me more in detail since I do want to improve
Thx Ifor replying, I get your points but honestly the whole shadow clone thing is a pretty tough jutsu in it and of itself since no other village has been able to replicate in over 80 years since Tobirama made it so I don’t think I over complicated it on the other hand Sage mode being achieved so easily is probably something I could have done better. thx for your review
no_life:the shadow clone technique that you over complicated, the casual way he achieves Sage mode, the way he goes to leaf and the guards just take a random kid to the leader of their village the most important and probably busy guy but yeah this random kid let's take him there, also why would they question some kid entering the village it's a big place people probably come and go all the time, this didn't bug me till the other reviewer said but the parents thing is true too.I did like the bear Summons it felt like they were his special cheat and it was pretty cool 😎 having him be an uzimaki is also pretty nice with there chains sealing and minds eye
Oh and the legal reason why the shinobi guards took him to the Hokage office is basically because he didn’t have any papers of identification so he needed the Hokage’s permission to enter and stay in the village.
no_life:the shadow clone technique that you over complicated, the casual way he achieves Sage mode, the way he goes to leaf and the guards just take a random kid to the leader of their village the most important and probably busy guy but yeah this random kid let's take him there, also why would they question some kid entering the village it's a big place people probably come and go all the time, this didn't bug me till the other reviewer said but the parents thing is true too.I did like the bear Summons it felt like they were his special cheat and it was pretty cool 😎 having him be an uzimaki is also pretty nice with there chains sealing and minds eye