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Item: The demon king is innocent: SB
Rating: 4.4

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The writing structure is very odd, with an IMMENSE amount of space in between each paragraph which could be a bit disorienting at times. But if you were to ignore that, the story has a development that will peak your interest.

The demon king is innocent: SB

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in my last novel ppl were complaining about the opposite that's y I tried bigger and more spaces in paragraphs. ToT but I'll think about it going on thanks.

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