it's not bad it's just.. fast? and kinda feels unorganised, i don't exactly know how to explain it but I don't think the story is for me, good luck on the story tho author
Lox_Of_Sins
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LIKELox_Of_Sins:Alright, normally I think about whether of a review is correct, or not when they give me two or something stars and if it looks like they are uninformed I just delete it, this however is understandable, have a great day and easter.image
JustTiredOfPicking:well, sometimes it's alright to be a hypocrite... I'll do the same ..XD