I love this story it is like a new type. the worst thing is that it is too much slow paced I mean tooooo much to the point from start to chapter 60 they are starting the dinner which has been on the table from 15 or 20 no chapter author I know you want to keep it slow paced but u have crossed the limit of it and I am not going to unlock the chapter with my coins when there is no much difference in every chapter. THE MAIN THING IS IF YOU STILL MAKE THE STORY THIS SLOW PACED I AM GONNA DROP IT AND NOT ME BUT EVRYONE HAVE THIS PROBLEM SO FIX THIS SLOW PACED . author i really love this novel plz stop making it so much slow paced I don't want to drop is so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 also reply me
AGodAmongMen
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LIKEYour opinion is totally understandable and I completely agree that the story is very slow paced. The reason this scene went for too long is because there was a family member involved and I didn't want it to be too forced. I will say that I've slightly changed my writing style to be more fast paced during the character interactions, but I still think that I'll be writing long 18+ scenes like before so I can't say the pace will dramatically improve, so it's totally understandable if you want to drop this series. Or you can read it by watching ads if you want. And thank you for the review
AGodAmongMen:Your opinion is totally understandable and I completely agree that the story is very slow paced. The reason this scene went for too long is because there was a family member involved and I didn't want it to be too forced. I will say that I've slightly changed my writing style to be more fast paced during the character interactions, but I still think that I'll be writing long 18+ scenes like before so I can't say the pace will dramatically improve, so it's totally understandable if you want to drop this series. Or you can read it by watching ads if you want. And thank you for the review
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