Review Detail of KingCrimSoon in Warlock Crimson Of The Abyss

As a good author, I must give a positive review of my novel. I want to clarify that this is my first novel, so if you can give me constructive criticism I would appreciate it very much, I do not want to be killed with criticism, I am not so strong as to be able to endure that :( This novel will be very exciting, I promise, at the beginning, it may be a little slow, but that will only be at the beginning, after a few chapters it will be more fluid and exciting. I want to clarify that the MC at the beginning is an 11-year-old boy, he is very smart but many times he is going to act his age. Likewise, the first chapters are for you to experience the physical and psychological change or development of the MC and to see his constant growth in that world, so there will be constant fights at the beginning (enjoy battle lovers). I'm going to do 5 or 4 chapters per week, it will increase if you support the novel more than support the leave this author dry with a daily chapter hahahahahahaha. I take advice and recommendations so feel free to write.