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Man I had high hopes but it seems like the author just skimmed through shadow slave chapters and wrote it based on what he remembers, same for mahoraga's adaptation. The writing quality isn't bad but it ain't good either and he's too optimistic fighting 100 Titans and defeating them as a dreamer I can say more but too lazy to
Divine General Mahoraga in Shadow Slave
The_oneandonly344
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no its just that the 100 titans was too unreasonable and in the first nightmare I hope you edit the beginning chapters
The_oneandonly344:Says the guy who only read like 6 ch. I admit I made mistakes in the beginning. That’s why I’m the synopsis I said to give it a few ch to get good. And I’ve already explained why the adaptability works that way in the later chs. It’s something that can’t be explained in 6 chs.
The_oneandonly344AuthorThe_oneandonly344
I know that I messed up. But you see I’m too lazy to fix it. So yeah here we are. This is on me too.
0Klein_amon0:no its just that the 100 titans was too unreasonable and in the first nightmare I hope you edit the beginning chapters
0Klein_amon0Lv10Klein_amon0
The_oneandonly344:I know that I messed up. But you see I’m too lazy to fix it. So yeah here we are. This is on me too.