Review Detail of hero4hire in Divine General Mahoraga in Shadow Slave

Alright so i wasnt clear about it. I actually dont care if its different from cannon i mean its a fanfic its a plus point that you can add your own element to the story. The problem wasnt in the early chapter which were imo almost perfect, the problem is with recent chapter were you seems to have forgotten your own established plotline, power etc... MC was already too OP from the beginning and i agree with slowing it down make the story more enjoyable, nobody want mc that can solve everything with a punch and have a thousand pokemon harem right? But you have to clear up some facts in the story itself for it make sense, like MC musing to himself how his "perfect adaptablity" doesnt seems to to coping well with high level monster and thinking perhaps it doesnt work against too high level creatures. This is just an example you can do it your own way and this might even add the tension and danger to the story, but when you didnt address any of that it seems like you forgot mc even have that ability and not just some high level regeneration. There a few other things like this in the recent chapters but i wont bore you with the detail. I dont think you delete review and i have to apologized i was too worked up after binging the recent chapters. You desever better rating so i'll remove this myself in a few hrs so hopefully you see this reply.