It is a fantastic work u guy should read it 9.7/10 for me no system, realistic world Mc is a hardworking, good mindset for the Author u should make teammates have more personality (rival or something) my English is not that good but im trying haha
Sphire1707
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LIKEThanks for your review and just like you want, I am constantly improving my writing and already have plans to improve the realism of the characters and all that... I've just been focusing on getting the story off the ground first in the least amount of chapters possible younno, I'm not trying to stretch the story into oblivion just for profit. I want my readers to feel like they're getting appropriate value and progress for what they're paying for đ