Review Detail of St0rmDa11i_ in Inside my favorite novel

Brother, really these chapters are making very boring, different from the initial chapters of your novel. And please take off MC's mask, if the story was cliché before, with this it became just another run-of-the-mill novel. What is the need for the masks? It's simply ridiculous, take that crap off and that's it. And there are several chapters where the MC does nothing, just thinks, when that text can be summarized in a few chapters. The truth is that I loved this novel at the beginning, it deserved 5 stars, but now it's simply falling....