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Anonymous_Jokez
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I read all the available chapters and I gotta say, it was quite underwhelming. Perhaps if the story was some what more serious it would be enjoyable. The main character is very airheaded and childish for his actual age which in turn has the reader wondering whether to continue reading or not. It’s more of a slice of life/ shounen story. I don’t see the main character getting stronger than his past self at the rate the story is going. The world building albeit slow is getting there I think? Overall though it’s written well but it lacks interest and gets boring fast. It’s just the normal same old reincarnation and head to magic school to do nothing story. I do hope the story progresses well over time but it lacks a reason to keep reading. We know nothing of the main characters skills and traits beside his soul gear. Even the side characters have more depth than him lol I hoped to see more swordsmen skills displayed in the early chapters since that’s what makes or breaks a story. Fine idea but airheaded main characters kinda ruin it.

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The Swordsmans Return with Mana

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Moon_Granade
Moon_GranadeAuthorMoon_Granade

ah about that being childish, I'm changing somethings and editing the chaps. that's why it's slow on updates. thanks for reading my novel

Anonymous_Jokez
Anonymous_JokezLv14Anonymous_Jokez

Sorry if my review came off as harsh. I didn’t mean it if so.

Moon_Granade:ah about that being childish, I'm changing somethings and editing the chaps. that's why it's slow on updates. thanks for reading my novel
Moon_Granade
Moon_GranadeAuthorMoon_Granade

no it's ok, this are problems. I'm fixing them already

Anonymous_Jokez:Sorry if my review came off as harsh. I didn’t mean it if so.
yixibac509
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story not good?