Review Detail of Raul_Romero in Pokemon - The Timeless Journey

At Ch-42 It's a really good fic, few pokemon fanfics can reach this level (at least on this site), like in all fics there are things that someone would like and others would just hate, personally I think that with this fic you can't choose a side, so you can only criticize them with "logic" in the sense of situations, whit that said, this are just a few points that really make me want to drop this: -It looks like with only want something rellay strong the second characters would reach the MC level just to make them relevant, with reincarnations fics I think that the firs arcs of the fic you should only focus on the MC cause no one would have the motivation and the mindset to reach the peak as someone who knows the future. -About second characters, it looks like you would force pokemons, talents, materials, resources, etc just to keep them relevant, for example, SPOILER Emma already have a pokemon, hope you dont force Sabrina to give her one if you already shows that if someone with talent needs to go trough hard times, thats why you stop her to give a pokemon to the MC, also since the start feels that you want to keep her in the fic making her appearances forced and annoying, seems that you force a nerf on the MC just to out of nowhere force a buff on her just because she is "competitive" and "want it hard enough", just quit with her, you already said that this fic would be 500k+, the main second characters should only appear in the middle of the fic and be mucho more older than the MC or you gonna tell me that any kid with talent can reach the MC with knowledge of the future, mature mindset, the biggest motivation and (at least in soul) older? -I also hope that you don't force the improvement of weak talent pokemons just because they are MC pokemon or side character pokemon, this is a mistake that Pokémon: Tactics Master also had, out of nowhere all the side characters appear with the best talents pokemons knowing that they are supposed to be really rare. My english is really bad and I don't want to use a translator cause it loses the real meaning I want to convey, sorry