I don't know if I just shut my mind while reading this novel or if this novel is just that good but I really haven't found anything wrong with the novel so far. Honestly, I believe webnovel's algorithm did this novel dirty. It's deserves much more but the discoverability is not that high. I would recommend a rewrite usually but that would mean I would have to wait for a while to catch up, so instead try promoting your novel on discord author. In most of the discord server of popular novels there is a place to suggest novels. You can share your novel there and people in that server would read it if it picks their interest. This is one of the novels that I look forward to reading these days. Keep doing what you are doing author, one day, you will make it.
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